๐๐ค๐ช๐ง ๐๐ซ๐๐ง ๐ฝ๐ง๐ค๐ฌ๐ฃ ๐๐ฎ๐๐จ (POEM OF THOUGHTS NO.2)
๐๐ค๐ช๐ง ๐๐ซ๐๐ง ๐ฝ๐ง๐ค๐ฌ๐ฃ ๐๐ฎ๐๐จ
It was as deep as the trench.
Cowers like the shadows,
Wide as the skies
And it sparks like the fire
It was the shade of saddle mud,
The whiskey hue of brown,
It twisted me within,
It captivates my eyes
It was the amber of the sun.
Grows like the vines,
Whistle like the wind
Run like boars in the wild
It was the cliff I hung from,
Now I have fallen astray.
I'm lost and caged.
But I was bound by your ever brown eyes.
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What a nice poem. Heals my heart
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DeleteFor someone to be captivated by your eyes and write a poem about it is a dream. <3
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Deleteang ganda ng pagconstruct ng poem, especially sa paggamit ng words to describe someone's eyes :))
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DeleteI love how you've used nature and natural elements to describe the qualities of those 'ever brown eyes.' It adds a rich layer of meaning to the poem.
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ReplyDeleteBeing able to create a poem in such a creative way is amazing. Thank you for sharing this with us. Keep it up!
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